Try to feel these (my) words
as they gather momentum,
bend around the curves,
flow along a course.
Water touching (caressing) earth.
Earth determining (guiding) the route.
The path (fate) of water within,
seeking (pursuing) its destination.
Growing more of its self.
Sustained (contained) by the earth,
teasing (pleasing) the land.
From the (masculine) mountains
coming, eventually, relentlessly,
into the (feminine) sea of desire.
Photo Locations:
Crested Butte, (Crested Butte) Colorado
Another job well done, FN. I like water: rain, rivers, lakes, oceans! I will be watching the lunch of richardhavenga.com.
ReplyDeleteLove how you see things--and capture them in words as well. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteSantiago:
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed my poem, as the words found the course to their goal.
The launch for my website: richardlhavenga.com is coming soon.
Richard L. Havenga
Marcia:
ReplyDeleteI love the creative writing process involved in poetry. The flow of the words gained momentum as the current sought its destination.
Richard
Rich, I read (and always enjoy) as many of your poems as I can. Thank you for the beautiful words from your pen!
ReplyDeleteSantiago:
ReplyDeleteThank YOU for your beautiful words of admiration. You are my most loyal reader.
I am spending many hours a day writing, revising, and thinking about my poetry. I find comfort, and contentment before, during, and after my writing.
Gratefully,
Richard
I'll be watching the launch of your web page.
ReplyDeleteSantiago:
ReplyDeleteMy website was launched on May 1, 2013. At WWFN, go to the top of any post. There, under the heading: "MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT", you will see my Google Sites address. Click it and you're there.
Check out my list of SERVICES. Please pass it around to those who may want to do business with "Father Nature".
Gratefully,
Richard
Richard I really love this one and I mean that sincerely every word flows like the streams to the oceans
ReplyDeleteTeresa:
ReplyDeleteThank you for your sincere response. I believe this is one of my more sensuous poems.
Gratefully,
Richard